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Chapter 18: Tickle Torture
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It was another bright day for the wolf pack in Jasper Park. Everything was peaceful as usual. Everyone was being their usual happy selves. Well, everyone except for Wildfire, who was lying near the lake feeling embarrassed after being tickle tortured by Star and some other female wolves. Her brother, Jet, noticed her and went down to see what was wrong.

"Hey Wildfire. Whats bugging you?" Jet says, sitting next to her,

Wildfire looked at Jet and got up.

"Oh, it's nothing really." she says in a quiet voice,

"It doesn't look like nothing. What's the matter?" Jet says, "Something got on your mind? You can talk to me about it."

"Well, okay. It's because of when Star and the other girls tickle tortured me the yesterday after the scavenger hunt." Wildfire says,

"Whats wrong with that? I'm sure they only did it for fun!" Jet says, pulling a smile.

"But Star just told them that I'm very ticklish. I'm not mad at her, but I wanted her to keep it a secret. Now that they tickled me so much, I feel so humiliated." Wildfire says, lowering her head a bit.

Jet then started to think, then all of a sudden, an idea popped in his head.

"Say, why not get back at her?" Jet says,

"No. I couldn't. I don't want to hurt her. That's not what the daughter of the Alpha leader would do." Wildfire says,

"No, no, I don't mean fight her. I mean, is she ticklish too?" Jet asks.

"Oh, well I don't know. When we were younger, she always use to tickle me whenever Aunt Lilly came over." Wildfire says,

"Actually she's just as ticklish as you Wildfire." someone said from behind Wildfire and Jet. It was Hunter.

"I use to tickle her before, and she was going nuts laughing. Just like you were Wildfire." Hunter says,

Then a grin comes to Wildfire's face.

"Well, well, well. I'm her oldest cousin and she didn't even tell me that. But I'm not surprised. OK then. She revealed I was ticklish, now I reveal that she's ticklish. Say boys, you up for a little torture?" Wildfire says with an sly and evil grin.

The boys also grinned.

"Why not? After all, Star deserves a good tickling anyway." Jet says,

So later, Wildfire, Jet, and Hunter find Star sleeping next to a tree. They carry her and take her to a spot where no one will hear her laughing, meaning that no one can help her. They place Star on her back, get a couple of vines and tie them on her wrists and ankles. star's body was now spread apart leaving it vulnerable and exposed for a good tickling.

"Wakey wakey Star." Jet says,

"I'll get her armpits and ribs boys. You two can get her feet." Wildfire says,

"Oh boy, this is gonna be so much tickling my little sister." Hunter says, then Star started to yawn and wake up.

"Huh? Wildfire, Jet, Hunter, what's going on?" Star asks,

"Payback time, that's what." Wildfire says with an evil grin,

Star then noticed she was tied to the ground.

"What the?! Why I'm tied to the ground?!" Star squealed, who started to squirm and try to break free but the vines were too strong and tight to the ground.

"Sorry Star, but we're not letting you free until we have you laughing like a hyena!" Jet laughed,

Star gulped as she knew what they were going to do.

"You aren't going to... you know..?" Star stuttered,

"What? Do this?" Wildfire says, starting to tickle Star's toes.

"Hahahahahahahahaha nohohohohohohoho please! That tihihihihihihihickles!" Star giggled,

"Awwwww, how cute. My little cousin is so ticklish. Well boys, let's give her something to remember that!" Wildfire says with an evil chuckle and then stood over Star and started to tickle her now exposed armpits.

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA STOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOP NOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO I'M TIHIHIHIHIHIHIHIHIHIHICKLISH!!" Star laughed as she started to move around. Wildfire then lifted her tail and brushed it against her stomach.


"Hmmm, I'm bored. Should we start with her widdle feet?" Jet asks,

"Don't mind if I do." Hunter chuckles. They both bent and licked around Star's feet.


"Nah, sorry cousin. I like payback better than an apology. And this is really fun. I don't think I'll ever stop." Wildfire laughed evilly as she continued to mercilessly tickle Star's armpits and stomach with her tail.


"Sorry Star, but we're in a spot where no one, not even the geese flying can hear you. It's an eternal tickle sis!" Hunter chuckled, then he started to tickle Star's toes with his "fingers".

"AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I BEG YOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOU!" Star laughed and begged, but her tickle torture was very far from over.

An hour had passed and the trio were still tickling Star in her ticklish spots.

"Man. I can't believe I'm gonna say this, but Star is more ticklish than Wildfire. But that means this torture can last longer. Tickle tickle tickle!" Jet laughs,

A goose feather then flew beside Hunter, which gave the teenage red-brown wolf an idea.

"Hmmmm, now this is very useful." Hunter chuckles, then started to stroke Star's soles which started to drive her mad, and more and more tears came running down her cheeks.

"Awwwww, this is fun and adorable at the same time! Even Wildifre's is not as ticklish as this! Maybe we should do this again another time!" Jet chuckled, tickling her soles with his fingers.

"This is the best revenge I've ever done!" Wildfire laughs evilly, now tickling Star's ribs with her fingers very hard.


A second hour had passed and Star's breathless laugh was losing sound, showing that she's about to pass out. Her armpits, ribs and feet were glowing pink from all the hard tickling, and Star's cheeks were blush red.

"And now, for the finish. Get ready, my very ticklish cousin." Wildfire giggled evilly and then Hunter handed her the goose feather and Wildfire started stroking her stomach.

Star tried to hold in her laugh this time, but as Wildfire started to stroke faster, her laugh was let out and laughed as loud as ever.


Star could not take anymore and then, as the stroking got even faster, Star's eyes started to close and she passed out.

"YES! My revenge is complete! Muhahahahahaha!" Wildfire laughs evilly,

"You sure got her good, sis." Jet says with a smile.

"Yeah. Even though I love her, it's been a lot of fun giving her a good tickle torture. Now, should we take her back to the pack before she wakes up?" Hunter says. The others nodded in agreement as they untied Star and took her back to the pack.

Later on, Star began to regain consciousness and open her eyes and found herself beside Wildfire.

"AH! Please no more, Wildfire! I'm sorry for what I did!" Star jumped in fright.

"Ah, don't worry. I just wanted to get back at you. But my, my, you never said you were way more ticklish than I am." Wildfire giggled as Star blushed in embarrassment.

"Yeah, yeah, you got me. I am." Star says in her blushy voice.

"Don't worry. Because I'm feeling generous, I won't tell anyone. Just don't tell any other of the wolves other than Jet, Hunter and the females that I'm also ticklish, okay?" Wildfire asks,

"Sure thing, cous." Star says as she smiled in relief.

Later, Star returns to her den.

"There you are." Lilly says upon seeing her daughter, "Where have you been?"

"Wildfire got revenge on me." Star says,

"I told you not to give her the Tickle Torture." Lilly says, "But you did it anyway and Wildfire had you pinned to the ground on your back as she tickled you."

"How do you know that?" Star asks,

"Because the exact same thing happened to me when I gave Kate the Tickle Torture" Lilly says,

"Oh." Star says, "Well, I'm kinda hungry. Do we have any caribou left over?"

"Yes." Lilly says,

"Okay, thanks!" Star says as she heads for the food stache,

"She sure is just like you from when you were younger." Garth says as he walks up to Lilly,

"She sure is." Lilly says as she watches her daughter lovingly while she eats some of the caribou they had.
Chapter 18 of my Alpha and Omega fanfic.

Well, looks like Star sure had it coming this time considering she gave Wildfire a Tickle Torture and she got revenge for it! :XD:
Not to mention Lilly went through the exact same thing! :XD:
But how you may ask? Well, take a look at [link] to see why! :XD:

But what will happen next? :)
Stay tuned for Ch. 19 to find out! :D

Please comment if you fav.
Do not copy, edit, or distribute without my permission!

Original idea for chapter given permission by :iconwolfstar1010:
(She wanted to see the tickle torture in the fanfic. :aww:)

:pointl::bulletyellow: -- [link] -- | :bulletred:ALPHA AND OMEGA 2:bulletred: | -- [link] -- :bulletyellow::pointr:
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Alpha and Omega belongs to Crest Animation Productions, this is just my idea for a sequal to the film. ;)
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GoldenWolf95 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Nah, sorry cousin. I like payback better than an apology. And this is really fun. I don't think I'll ever stop." Wildfire laughed evilly as she continued to mercilessly tickle Lilly's armpits and stomach with her tail.  

And Here:
And now, for the finish. Get ready, my very ticklish cousin." Wildfire giggled evilly and then Hunter handed her the goose feather and Kate started stroking her stomach.
DarthGoldstar710 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
Thanks for pointing them out. I just fixed them.
GoldenWolf95 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
'kay :D
DarthGoldstar710 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
Yeah. :D
GoldenWolf95 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
(Sorry, iPad went weird and didn't lemme post as a reply)
GoldenWolf95 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
seems you accidentally called Star Lilly and Wildfire Kate.
DarthGoldstar710 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
Really? Where?
WildfireOfFireClan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
DarthGoldstar710 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Well, you gotta admit it was funny. :XD:
WildfireOfFireClan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
it was
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